Wednesday 23 March 2011

The Monitor- Plan

Camera looking out the window
Carly looks at best friends walking past the window happily talking.
Carlys talks about how its trixys fault shes in a mess
-cut to a picture of carly and trixy
Zoom in on carlys face
-crying.
She walks across the room, lies on bed
-throws the picture and rips it up
Carly lying down, camera on top
Talks over everything.- flashbacks.
Keyboard is tapping
Flashes of things that happened in the rest of the story.
 -pictures of her in a room.
-two people holding hands
-back of her head on the computer
- are we still meeting later? On the screen
-camera’s flashing
-locks of hair in a bag.
-crime scene investigation banner zoomed in
-zoom in on dust brush thing.
-flashes going off.
-delivering flowers to a doorstep (death & presents)
Keyboards still tapping.
We see and understand how and why she got into the mental hospital.
Keyboard makes her go psycho.
She has a fit
Blacks out

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